Hm...
Well, Shadowmjl,
I think you worked really hard on this..
The animation was still great, but, you should do more easing on the Virtual Camera and add more FX.
But, the idea of mixing Mario with Dragon Ball was done many times (Alvin Earthworm's Flash movies for example).
Maybe you should try something new.
So, keep animating and improving =]
~2DPolygon