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I didn't mind the animation and honestly thae story was a little interseting. Then the ending came out of nowhere. Honestly wtf and why.
Reviews for "Friendship."
funkycaveman responds:
It was mainly due to time restraints, the animation is almost 4 minutes long and we tried out best to make it polished all the way through.
Unique to the first NG Movie Jam.
This is rather a difficult thing to say for your flash animation basically theres mixed emotions for this. I enjoyed the soundtracks performed in this little short and the animation was semi decent on how it was presented. Now I have to agree with the rest of the community present here that the main portion of your story ends quite abruptly. Its a nice simplistic tale about a boy that befriends a crow. Yet I notice there's alot of plot holes in this tale, For instance the boyscout had a friend along with him what was his fate later? How did the boyscout get into the farthen regions of the woods? What had caused the crow its wound? Why did it turn on his new comrade the boyscout? These are questions that are still turning within peoples heads as well as my own. In respect, Its rather a unique enigma that can only be answered by you the creator. I'm awarding you an average 6/10 and a 4/5. Hopefully you'll make a sequel that might answer some of the scenarios that have been presented here. Until then, Good day.
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oh common is it even possible for a bird to kill a human let alone one whos wing is busted its not like birds are that mobile without their wings anyway nice idea though
Mneh...
Can you sink an apprenticeship? I hear more about friendships going wrong...
Has potential but I think it needs more to hold it together. The one-off narration didn't work for me either (a "several years later" dialogue might have worked better)...
that was very confusing...
1:you say that the bird is a demon,if that is true,then WHY was we lying on the ground?
2:how come the boy lived on the forest for years but he look the same as before?
3:if the bird is a demon,why did he became a friend with the boy and lived with him for years?
4:why didnt the bird just killed the kid at the beginning?
5:how the fuck did the bird started the fire?
6:how did the bird killed the boy if he was on the ground the entire time,did he just stared at him to death?
7:if the bird is a demon,then why in the fuck did the he started to cry in the end,he is A FUCKING DEMON.
8:why did the bird started the fire,what was he trying to do?
9:the kid got lost in the forest,but why did the other scouts just simply left him there?
10:why did the boy had scissors and duct tape with him,I didnt knew that boy scouts sleep with that kind stuff
this was just a huge mess,but not the worst I've ever seen