lol
he looked like his spine was broke and then it just stops mid flash, ha
Reviews for "Guy plays Xbox"
good but...
i cant hear the sound
Alien9000 responds:
uh....yea.Thats y i need help on what to do when there is no audio.
not bad
the animations were good. i guess i will have to go to youtube to hear it though. good luck fixing it on here.
Alien9000 responds:
How do i get the audio on this clips on newgrounds?
Its not THAT bad
It just needs some work, audio, and a preloader. The walking was almost Spot on too.
You gotta start somewhere.
You wanted to make a flash so you tried and anyone can tell you that you failed, however, I believe that you succeeded because you wanted to do something and you did.
My opinions won't change basic facts-
No one begins their first flash looking spectacular and if they do- good for them.
The truth is this video lacks more than just audio. The location of the television in relation to the couch gives the illusion that they collide. I noted the top right corner. You made a ceiling, a back wall, and a right wall- you never made the floor. I think had you made the floor the placement of the couch and TV would have been easier. The proportions of the body were odd. The human torso is smaller than both the arms and legs. I noticed you made two connected line areas for a lap when the gamer was sitting. I think it would be more beneficial to make his legs longer to look more natural.
I am not an animator. But I do know enough Character Animation Majors at my University to know that, "Animation like everything else will take alot of practice."