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This seems to be based on loud cursing and crude humor to be funny. That's not really my thing, but it the style goes along with the dialog and it was funny that the kid just kept asking and asking.
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FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
The style is actually based around the owl and how he is literally going insane all because of this stupid kid who asks him the same question over and over and over again. The turtle adds to the humor, because he is already senile and enjoy the kids company. The owl curses for a reason.
That was...
strange, creepy and somewhat educational in the end... so... yea I really don't know what to say except... dude wtf lol.
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Very gross, very awesome. My favorite is the animation skillz. Great job dude, the motions and lip movements synced very well! The sound and some of the content was a bit crude but the humor makes up for most of it. Keep it up man, can't wait to see more from you.
something differant here
Its not all thetime that one comes across a flash submission like this one, its somewhat differant but has an exciting feel and touch here, As soon as this started it was something unique and differant ofcourse but thats more on the plus side of things. OK so now as i get into the review, i like what you have done here, it is for sure something "UNIQUE" and differant, one issue i didnt like much was the twelve mega bites this flash has, its not a bad thing because i know you want to get alot of info and content in there but maybe theres a way you can cut down on a large file such as this maybe some small details here and there, maybe something else, maybe even condensing the submission into a couple of parts or something. and once again i must say that was a pretty good entry something differant but i liked it for what it is, Wish there was more like this, but for what it is, its pretty interesting and entertaining ofcourse, but with all that said i hope to see more stuff from you eventually.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so that brings us to some improvments, not always my fave part of the review but its good to have some new ideas jumping around and such, So i will do my best to suggest some new ideas maybe even some inspiration, and hope the ideasdo help, so here are some ideas, cut down on a large file such as this maybe some small details here and there, maybe something else, maybe even condensing the submission into a couple of parts or something.
LOL
the turtle was stupid but i love the owl freak out...