a few bits were funny
Yeah I don't really understand what was funny about this, unless there's some hidden joke in this. There were a few bits that were kind of funny but not exactly laugh in real life funny. It relied too much of being "spontaneous" or "random" unless I'm missing some references.
Facial expressions were good I think, especially for the genre. Animation just needs a bit more work, it was a bit slow at scenes that were meant to be quick.
Okay, well if you don't like spontaneous, I don't think our series is for you, but we will be focusing more on a solid storyline in later episodes.
And I'm glad you praised the facial expressions, that was what I hoped people would like.
Mediocre would be a compliment
There were some good elements, but significant errors that despite the nature of it all need to be addressed. The foremost of these erros being volume. Can we please get soemthing that doesn't go from hush to blaring and back?
The randomness thing has never been my preference, but randomness in and of itself doesn't mean it's humorous. Now perhaps I have a different sense of humor now from when I was 5, but this barely managed to make me crack a smile.
My only disappointment is that I watched it the whole way through in hopes that there was going to be something redeemable. Fortunately I do appreciate the effort in frame by frames, and interchanged art styles as well as cliche animation theme tributes, so it's not worthless, it just needs some refinement is all.
Okay, thanks. Although this series was always intended to be more spontaneous, future episodes will make more sense.
The volume was a huge issue for some people, and I'm sorry about that. I'll do my best to tweak that later so less people complain.
But thanks, at least you didn't just say "that sucked you faggot." That was quite nice of you.
wow
what a pile of shit ........... and yet i couldn't be happier good work( especially the ending)
...thank you?
Slapstick me likey
GREAT WORK MA, looking forward to the next one
Great! :D
Wellwellwellwellwellwellwellwellwellwellwell
That was the BEST F***ING THING I'VE EVER SEEN, you should have the protaganist come back and kill the pants, BUT for now, this is the seriously funniest thing I've ever seen, I liked how it was poorly drawn but still looked good, and the humor, WAS F***ING HILARIOUS. Make another one PLLLEEEEAAAASEEEE
Well, we will make another one, so hold yer horses. The poorly drawn was somewhat intended, but it was mostly because I'm lazy and don't feel like making extremely complicated characters. :P