Reviews for endeavor

[StarkRED]

Reminiscent yet Unique

This game was quite masterful in plot.
The only thing I must point out is how the plot was started. There doesn't seem to be fateful event from which comes the dwarf's tragic fall. I must emphasize fateful. I guess it would be quite cliche for a story to develop due to fate, but wherein does the reason for him jumping off the cliff lie? Is is simply due to exploring and he was not strong enough?

*SPOILER WARNING, mates (sorry)*
I must again applaud you for the plot. Choice (or shall I say Freedom?). That's the simple entirety of the game. Most gamers, as I was, are probably not aware that they have choices in how to get back up when in fact there are.
The choice of trusting that voice and the quest given by it is the plot that is quite reminiscent of Shadow of the Colossus. The story, however, of it is the only thing I am allowed to compare your game to that of SotC. It would be foolish of me to do otherwise...

The thing of beauty in your game, if not the environment, music, and atmosphere, is the realization gamers must face in aftermath of the their first play-through and its tragic plot twist. It is the realization of guilt for trusting that voice. It is also the realization that you have the freedom of choice in this game.

I would give you a 9/10 for how you initially deliver plot, but the entirety of the game makes up for it. This is the only game that made me both consider and actually create an account for the sole purpose of writing a review.

Excellent Job, I hope to see more of your work.

-StarkRED

[jack-ass]

A fun game :>

a fun game for a couple of hours, and after you finish it, it's still fun.
and to answer that question about the "how to finish the game without killing", you need to find the boots that allow you to move in the windy area, the parachute, the gloves and the other things but DO NOT KILL anything!
you need to go left from the starting point (the place with the grave), until you get to a point where you'll need to climb, there you'll find the fruit of youth that gives unlimited endurance and after that you'll find the way by yourself.
and by the way, the game rocks!

[bloodgreaver]

best game ever

The thought put into this game was extensive! I like the music, LOVE the dialogue (too much kills a game but none is just boring/confusing) and the implied morals of the game makes it perfect for anyone. The ending was a little lacking, perhaps a cutscene of him using the sword to stab into the tomb or something? How can a midget carry a sword 10x his height anyways? As well as that, you could also improve it by adding in a small mini map (maybe add it into one of the current items *hint*) Otherwise, keep up the great work and larry mittenhands will pale in comparison!

[Critic96]

Great!

This is a great game, but how do you get different endings?

[grimkreg]

GREAT

had a lot of fun with this. great game