Why why why...
This was unbearable to watch. I'll give you a 1 for effort.
There are two things that do not blend together at all. Anime and Poor Drawings. Anime is fine; I like it. Poor Drawings are poor drawings. But if you draw poorly and you try the anime style then it usually comes out looking terrible. Practice on your drawing skills if you really want to try anime. Please.
Onto why the anime does NOT work. For instance, the Metapod scene. He gets all angry about being named penis (very very old 'joke') and his eye turns red. An anime characteristic of course, but you're not an anime artist. It just pisses me off when people do the whole "eye's going red out of anger" anime thing because it NEVER WORKS. Unless you're an anime artist, you can't do it right. The voice 'actor' wasn't funny in the least. In order for us to believe he's angry you need the actor to convey emotion. Otherwise the anger is completely lost in terrible voice acting.
And please drop the memes next time. At least keep up with the new memes if you're persistent on using them. All in all, work harder. And don't feed me the bullshit "If you can't do any better then don't critique.". My animations aren't that great either. But food critics don't critique knowing they can do better. I'm sure you can tell if food is terrible or not on your own without having a degree in the culinary arts.
Just work on it, ok?