Reviews for Closed In Addendum

[Dimitrilium]

hum... (sorry for bad english)

I think the guy shouldn't fall like this when you're freezed. It's... frustrating... And the fact you're gonna die if you jump is not that obvious.

Instead, the bar could start breaking, he would lose feet and keep a hold. Then you can choose to help and then the bar break, killing you both.

Or you go back because you're not gonna risk it or you hesitate, thinking the bar wouldn't support more weight. Unsure if its right to let the guy die like this.

Since you add a dialogue between those two this time. He could also scream something when he fall or if you try helping him. Adding a small dramatic taste before the ending. Like "why did you turn your back on me?.. Aaaah" or "Help. No wait! Go back it's..."

[albertwesker4ev]

I like

I liked it the ending was sad

[Mr-Izan]

*yawwwwwwnnnn*

would've made a better movie. there is no gameplay aside from jumping over the meteorites. meh.
and not being able to skip dialogue (i dont need 10 seconds to read 5 monosyllabic words) is kind of a slowdown.
doesn't seem very inspired, this concept has been done to death, the whole "abstract artsy" game thing needs a re-invention.

[KamaKage]

Over all...you didn't give it your best.

Your choice of music was good, very creepy feel to the whole thing. 2/2

Art was nice, I will let you slide on the poor pixilated characters because if the game had more to it, they would have been fine. 1/2

Sound worked, but there was no sound for the meteorites or seas, it seemed too quiet. A little BGS just faintly there would have helped set the mood more properly. 1/2

Game play...there was none, it was more like watching a slow movie then picking between two bad endings. 0/2

Entertainment Value: It started with a fine hook, really creepy look I was hoping for a horror or mystery, traveling along it seemed ok. When I reached the end I was expecting things to get interesting, they didn't. 0/2

Moral is way off, killing yourself because of the death of a loved one is only selfish not loyal. I will not help promote suicide, and for this you will not receive any stars.

If you had taken the time to turn this into a true mystery, maybe it would have been a nice game. You had a great beginning very ominous, it got a bit interesting when meteors started falling without warning. Entering the compound at the end was indeed a nice touch however...there was nothing to do, nowhere to go. The ending is somewhat sad, her loved one falling to his death...but the choice next, kill yourself or go home. Killing yourself is only selfish, causing further grief to everyone who cares about you. Then if you choose to leave and morn the loss of your husband and try to continue life, you die on the boat ride back..."punished" to be forever alone.

[Uberpig]

Has potential.

I looked for your original game but couldn't find it.
This game would be a lot better if there were more choices and better gameplay, to give the player the feeling they really had an influence on the ending.
As it is, you jump over unexplained meteorites then get one choice at the end. I was loyal :D
Maybe put in some puzzles to solve (what was that item I picked up in the penultimate screen and what do I do with it?).
I think the mechanics are fine, there just needs to be more to do than following a set path. It probably didn't help that I didn't "get" the plot.