why does everyone make the face :3
like seriously no body makes that face
and it bugged the crap out of me that the voices were at all differant levels of volume.
also the voices were a little way too terrible and poorly voiced.
put expression into your voice cause it sounds terrible
the worst were scoot and swiffer
but dont worry all were worse.
the humor wasnt THE MOST TERRIBLE but it was pretty hard to watch the whole thing, too much silence throughout it,
sooo i guess
humor: 1
animation: 3
voices: -14
story: 0
grammar: 8 (really should have been a 10 but you didnt even proofread your stuff)
creativity: 1
again i just cant beleive you think your voices are decent enough to submit it to the internet, and in the credits you all sound like 14 year old boys that think being a troll is the coolest thing ever. get a life. or stop publicizing your mind on the internet at least.