An artist on the making
I liked mostly the animations, you got a nice notion of it. But the story, the script and the cameras got a little simple and boring.
About the animation, i would do a little more hardwork on repetitive lines, the loop is about 4 or 5? It gets weird on the overall.
But, im giving 7 for the work and time spent to this great job!
:'(
you should've done the part where he gets annoyed of the tramp and beat her. xD
I've seen that SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO many times
I'm sorry, i'm don't want to generalize. I really like your animation and the style of it, don't get me wrong. But the RIPPING YOUR HEART out thing and EVIL GIRLS has just been used like a million times. The reason i gave a 7 it's because the story is nothing but a not original point of view about love.
And, seriously, girls shouldn't rule you (if this animation speaks to your emotions), unless you really want to be subordinated by one.
But it LOOKS COOL!
If you want something with content, read Sartre...
Wow...
Something about her smile rubs me the wrong way...
:) I am glad.
I imagine it as the scuffed history behind this:
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/whitedevil0404/my-wax-man