Great
Nice, good job man, I just don't like the bleeding at the end.
Reviews for "Ninja versus demon"
yah
the end's blood was sloppy after awhile i wondered wich one was the ninja cause a demon would easily kill a ninja then the gray thing finnaly bleeded blood in sted of that gray stuff
I want more
This was short...but fulfilling. I enjoyed the choreography, I even liked the demon being a little freakishly happy. However if I may, a few suggestions:
1. More color - I noticed that you we're going for the grey scale-ish style, but still, it's more satisfying to the eye to see more vivid color in both background and on characters. (opinion)
2. Character Shape - Their body shape seemed a little disproportionate in the torso/leg section. Maybe it was their outfit? lol I'm not sure. This is more of an observation rather than a critique. For all I know they are meant to look like that.
3. Someone said it earlier, and I have to agree, their movements we're stale at times or as he put it: "movements kinda seemed a little weird and didn't match the rest of it "movements kinda seemed a little weird and didn't match the rest of it" . Just here and there though.
All in all this is just screaming potential. You have what it takes, you'll get that look you want soon enough. You get a 5/5 on me. =D
Decent
Loved how the demon's face was unchanging and how the ninja seemed so... intent on everything almost like he thought he could stare it to death. anyway, would have been nice to have a more definitive ending but still good.
Neh
Loved it, but hated it at the same time. I think I would've have been more of the person going, "Yeah! Yeah! Just keep it up!" And I see you have potential, but that last scene when the demon gets its face sliced up, the blood just sucked. Sorry to say but getting a gash in your head like that won't just cause a few spots to trickle down your face. Definitely need to cover the whole gash first off, then make sure some bone shows for effect, unless of course demons don't have bones in your opinion.