It's good but...
The voice actors are hard to understand, but they pull it off very well. this could be a good series.
Reviews for "Super Zombie World Part 1"
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Thanks :)
SUBTITLES
you need them!
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Ah.
good job
hears some improvements you need to make:
1. in the scene when their walking to peach's plane the gun sprites look bad.
2. toadsworth and bowser sound like someone has a sore throat.
3. need better writing it seems like most of the movie was in the credits.
MurderMysteryMan responds:
1. They're the same throughout?
2. That wasn't plaigerised at all -_-
3. Nope, just 2 minutes of the total 11.
Thanks
A valiant effort
I gotta say, when I read your script all those months ago, I was psyched. It was an epic, yet tragic tale involving characters like you've never seen them before.
To say that this movie met my expectations would be an...overstatement. But then again, this is the slow-moving first half. Moderately held down by loads of talking sequences and backstory. But it all could've been presented better. When Mario was speaking with the other survivors about his plan, it had to have been as much as 15 full seconds of absolutely nothing on screen moving. A blank image with voice acting behind it. To keep the viewer interested, you need to do more than just that.
The choice of music made up for it. The credits and menu themes were the kind any sane person would rock out too. The voice acting got the job done. Nothing too mindblowing or inventive. Though I must admit I giggled at one of my own lines. It's been so long I couldn't remember what I even sounded like. :P
The backgrounds were a subject of concern. Almost...boring. And in the hallway, there was no need to have a sign up that said "Hallway". That's so unnecessary. I would have instead put up a sign that said "EXIT -->". Wouldn't that make better use of the background?
I'm sorry mate, but this animation didn't sport enough redeeming qualities for its problems to be nonexistant. Think about how to improve while working on the next part.
MurderMysteryMan responds:
I can honestly say I expected this. Thanks
Great
Good:
-The music. Very well selection of music and remixes.
-The animation. Well, it's not the best, but it is FAR from bad. Hopefully this will get better with new episodes.
-How the zombies looked. They looked kickass.
Bad:
-The voice acting. Well, not a lot of complaints here. Just change Toadsworth's voice, cuz he sounds like a teenager with a sore throat(no offense), and the voices were a bit quiet. Also get itallian people to do Mario and Luigi's voice.
-Characters were out of character. Luigi should be a pussy(like when Mario asked if they agreed, Luigi should've been hesitant), Peach, well, I personally liked how she was all kickass, but it isn't like her.
-The backstory. There barely was any backstory at all. But the story itself was okay.
-How the zombies looked. Their eyes are gradient. I know this is trying to show us it's glowing, but it just isn't working. Also, add more movement to them please. And flesh wounds(I know that this is the first episode, so I won't take any stars off).
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Good: Thanks, I worked hard on it.
Bad: lol, know any Italians? Luigi does have a strong side in many of the games. lol at Peach. Okay, everyone looking at this right now. I wasn't going to say anything, but you'll find about HOW it happened at the end. Okay? I don't see the problem with the gradient. I put holes :P
Thank you :)