Dude!
This is AWESOME!
This flash EPIC!
Reviews for "Super Zombie World Part 1"
MurderMysteryMan responds:
thanks :)
Hilarious, but could have been executed better.
Even though some of it was predictable, I couldn't help but to laugh. You had an over all great story, but some parts could have been done better.
To name a few:
*Credits. The credits should wait until the end. Although not critical to the plot, the characters participating were already known. You revealed information unnecessarily. While I'm on this, you may want to make the transition a little slower. I'm usually a fast reader, but I could barely catch who was voicing which character because the credits moved so fast. I noticed that there was a person who did the voice for more than one character and you put both characters in different slides. Maybe for the next time you have a similar situation you can make the slide so it says "John Baker as 'Mario' and 'Luigi'" In this case John Baker is your voice actor, and Mario and Luigi his parts.
*Some of the voices didn't really match the character. Toadsworth for example. He only looked old. The voice actor who played him obviously wasn't the right choice. Not bashing the guy, but I'm sure he could have played another part
better.
*Emotion. In a few instances some of the lines lacked the appropriate emotion. Fear for example, was conveyed with a dull tone.
I hope you continue your work though!
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Okay, thanks for the critique :)
(I know I'm not saying much as a reply, but there's not much to be said. I can't disagree with what you're saying. I really appreciate it though.)
This made me realize....
The Mushroom Kingdom would be the absolute worst place to be during a zombie invasion. They can get you anywhere. Zombie Bloopers that could follow you on land. Zombie paratroopas could fly and catch you. Pokies that could extend and get you. And worst of all, Piranha plants can catch you anywhere on ground level. The only way to make it worse is if the boos became zombies. Then, There would be no where to hide. This deserve more than a 10.
This movie only lacked two things. captions and a scene select. other than that it was perfect. Let me know when part 2 comes out. Seriously send me a message. It's rare to see a a decent mario zombie flash. Well, I hope to see more.
Peace...
MurderMysteryMan responds:
lol, finally someone cuahgt the walking Zombie Blooper part :)
(psst, I have zombie Boos included, they just didn't appear in this part, but they don't play that big a role anyway)
Ah okay, thanks for the critic. lol Okay, I'll send you a PM. Thanks :)
it's...... it's....... EPIC !
EPIC 10000 %
To paraphrase Alan Harper "We are'a so screwed."
This was a wonderful treat thank you for posting
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Thank you for reviewing :)