cool!
Cool but i'll give 9 bcuz i always give 10.. auheauheua but nice job!
Reviews for "Super Zombie World Part 1"
MurderMysteryMan responds:
oh okay, thanks
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Well i have seen zombies and mario and sum of both. This is alright butit does go a lil slow. Also with me being a gamer i hear the nazi zombie SFX so tht does bring up harmful memories but makes it better for me. also bulletbills and twomphs are either stone or metal so idk how a bite will infect them but it makes it more of a challenge for the crew. I am looking forward for the next one and the billboard dude cant he stand watch (hes wood...), maybe some more violence idk. Good job!
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Harmful memories? How could Nazi Zombies be harmful?
Thanks :)
Not exactly what I expected.
Don't get me wrong, there's more potential in this plot than most other flash on this site. Personally, I was a bit shocked as to why nobody had actually gone through with the idea yet, and it's about damn time someone did!
That someone seems to be you, MurderMysteryMan.
Unfortunately, a couple of things just really killed the viewing experience for me. As much as I commend you for getting voice actors the way you did, they just didn't quite cut it. The animation wasn't really good enough, and the script was a bit shabby.
While overall looking at the big picture it may seem like a great flash, but it has SO many details slowly killing the overall quality and enjoyability that I failed to find myself engrossed in the plot, humor, or general experience.
I hope to see you continue this series, and I hope that you improve. Unfortunately, in your current state I can't see you're the least bit above average except for making a good theme to base the plot around.
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Harsh, but I can take it. Thanks :)
alright
i didnt like it that much but seeing as a lot of work went into it i give u a five
MurderMysteryMan responds:
/ I wish there was something in the video that would've convinced you higher.
Super Zombie World
I think you did a great job on this, its a great idea- not so original but I mean hey everyone lovez Mario World, and everyone loves the zombie apocolypse thing. The characters were okay, a little on the dull side though. Now to be completely honest- I think the dialouge (SP) was well.. horrible. Too out of the way kind of, not to the point.. does that make sense? Also the voices of the characters, in my opinion, were dredful.
They all pretty much sounded exactly alike and even though I know you were going for italian- sounded kind of like a russian accent to me. I think better dialouge (SP), change in backround music (perhaps pending on the scenes), maybe better battle scenes, and more realistic character voices would have made this submission truely excellent.
Might have been even better to just cut out the voices and go strictly with subtitles- lowering the backround music and adding more sound effects would have topped that off too.
I enjoyed this, I really did and I hope you don't take my suggestions offensively because its not what I intend at all. I think Super Zombie World has great potential, its kinda fun and with a few changes, udgrades, whatever.. I think you could have a really kool movie- you could make 20 of these and still have people hooked and wanting more! Congratulations on this one, its a good flash vid- and good luck with your future submissions.
MurderMysteryMan responds:
Thanks for your input, but honestly, I don't intend to lose the voices. Also, 20 parts? That's MUCH too much. This was just supposed to be one video, that I'm having to divide into parts. Thanks nonetheless. :)