very promising...
...but only promising. This, as are all serious games, could have been amazing and the storyline was neat, but I couldn't really get into the message being sent. Just work on that and it would be much more enjoyable. A suggestion is that you add stuff in-game so that we can learn more about the backstory. You could put in some material items that serve as memories about why she died, or just to make it richer. Or multiple endings. And to add on AthielD's comment, make it so that if the illusionist is walking and then he jumps, make it so that he will stop moving as he prepares to jump. This way he won't fall of the edge of the platform if you press the button too late. But overall great game!