Good Job
Well this actually made me sit on the edge of my seat, I jumped at two parts. But wow, the end kinda almost made me tear up a bit. Poor Scoot.
Its good that you explained that Kyo was bleeding and how he didn't die, so it made sence on why scoot didn't go splat when he fell. I feel so bad for scoot now though =(
Good job, and also great job on that crying baby thing, looks scary. >.<