Mind=blown, well kinda
This was awesome, could tell he put alot of work into it. This is some of the best animation ive seen on NG to date. But i did have some problems, i didnt like how the fight scene was at the very very beginning, and the humorous part was at the end. imo they shoulda be switched. wat i did like was the very ending with her drawing all the monsters, cant wait to see more
Potential
Well that was good. Now considering these idiotic so-called "reviews" written below, I'd like to offer some constructive criticism.
Video:
The drawing was crisp, but I think the animation could've been a little more fluid. I would suggest spending more time drawing extra frames and bumping up the frame rate.
Audio:
This series would be nothing without the music. Very fitting and the music levels were mixed well. The sound effects weren't implemented as well though. For example, there should've been some sort of impact sound accompanying Harut's punches. Not the overused "arcade" punch sound, but something appropriate. At other parts, the effects were drowned out by the music like the wall crashing and pencil scribbling, so try to balance the volume levels between music and effects.
Story:
I don't know what you have in store later in the series, but I'd like to know more about this shady "mentor's" background. Maybe set up an episode, where we take a look into his past.
Overall, this series seems to be planned well and if it improves these weaknesses, it may well become a Newgrounds staple.
Huh
Does anyone else notice that the ogre's face scar switches sides? o-O
The ogre reminds me of Trundle from LoL
honestly
Ok, I love the animation and the production quality, all top notch there. Your pacing and diaglog need some speeding up. I hate the hear the main characters talk. They're ill defined and seem to simply drone on through their speaking scenes.
This is the 4th installment and the story is just starting to become clear. I look forward to loving this series, but I don't yet.
im sorry
but u changed the guys voice that said ya ya and well i liked him the most and sense u changed it i was like wtf try to ceep the voices the same