lot of work
good job a+ how long? wow like it cool than cool some more
Reviews for "Duality Complete"
Weenog responds:
alil more then 4 months and one to many sleepless nights, thanks for the review than thanks some more ^^
Wow
It really had feeling and meaning too it, well done man.
very good
you are a credit to artsit
it was cool
i like the way the city looks
Weenog responds:
the videogame machinarium was a great inspiration to me on that part. if you havent played that game... do so, its a modern click and point puzzle game on pc & mac and one of the best of its kind.
Very short but i liked it.
~~REVIEW~~
Wow this starts off really crazy, didnt like that it didnt have a Play button, and it loops, gues it doesnt really need a preloader and all since, it was so very {SHORT] it was {AMAZING} though the animation itself was very impressive with good motion and loved the characters and great drawings you had in there, wish there was more color to it though, as it was just all black and white, you did have some and that was cool, but wouldnt mind abit more, ok so here comes a few suggestions for {IMPROVING} lets start off with the looping, now you could ad a stop-action code, to fix that, and also making it longer with more of the world to show aswell as more characters and more scenes all around would be another tip of improvment, the main thing for me is the loopings an easy fix as i did explain above and soon below, but anyways for what it was, it was very smooth and entertaining but just wish there was much more to it as it was very short but very intriging. anyways nice flash animation you have here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as said before, it does need to be longer and have much more content, what you had was awsome, so dont hold back and show us even more of that world, Try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, abit more color wouldnt hurt either, i like what you did with the flower but maybe have a character in color with everything else in black and white, anyways here are a few tips hope they help.
~~OVERALL~~
A refreshing black and white flash very intriging, but way too short.
~X~
Weenog responds:
The problem is this isn't a flash at all but hand drawn, thats the reason its so short, why there's no preloader or stop function...
It's converted it from an mp4 and don't actualy own flash....yet.
Also i noticed from your reviews that you enjoy lots of colour, but the black and white theme was relevant in this short.
Anyway, thanks for the review.