Why is this mature again?
I thought the voices sounded alright, but they really do need some more life in them. Nothing wrong with your animation, if that's your style then more power to you! The story seems interesting but there is too much going on that doesn't allow the viewer to fully grasp what it all is. Great animation, mediocre voices and storyline but overall a solid presentation none-the-less.
No story, Bad voice acting, immature.
Terrible voice acting, Complete lack of story, and frankly it's immature.
Graphics good but...
The graphics are top notch, however like most other people say the plot is a bit weak and i think the dialogue has no real dynamics to it, but I'm sure this will improve with time. Keep it up!
failure
uh.... some plot ight be nice and you could improve the voice acting........ over all the flash was iffy and if you want a sequel you need a plot.
Very nice!
this is a really good animation but pretty boring storyline