WOW this is actually really deep!
Obviously you worked really hard on the script, it shows! Reminds me of Neon Genesis Evangellion quite a bit. Anyways I guess my criticism would be that with such a good script you want voice actors to accentuate this depth. Also if there was a little more time taken in the drawings this would be just about perfect!
pretty dang good
Thanks for letting me voice in this
now, just some advice, whenever you get other VA's for you, you might want to higher up the sound a bit, so the audio levels are equal and not way outta left feild. That way it would sound natural and not have people below me blame my (expensive) microphone or my editing system
Thanks a bunch!
For both lending your voicing talent and the advice. I've got a lot to learn, and sound isn't my strength, so I've made certain to increase both the volume and the quality for future edits. All your hard work sounds [more] like it's there!
Good luck with your future projects!
Pretty creative
This was an interesting flash you made for Lock Day 2010,the animation looked good and seemed like a great style for the flash,the voice acting was real good too and the concept of the flash was creative,overall i think you did a real good job on your contribution for Lock Day 2010.
Good :D
It may be poorly animated graphically, but the plot is awesome, you could try adding colour and lip syncing in the future, like the colour you had at the start, but this is good, nice work :D, i think it could do without the text if it was all voice acted, but thats my opinion :D
Decent
That was pretty good but tell your voice actors to use a de-esser filter.