WHAT?
why was there a framed picture of both of them dead on his coffee table? that doesnt make sense.
Reviews for "Lines In Time"
artsy fartsy
I have to say I like the idea for doing the whole black scratchpad style b/c u never really see it too much. and the art was between simplistic stick figuers and detailed trees. alot of simple lines but with a great score and epic story. However u have a donnie darko ending . did the protaganist die and join his family? is the end really a suicide. b/c you didnt build up enouph dramatic sub theme to let me really conclude this. all in all your second inverse of colors being into the light again and your'happily ever after' suggest eithor a totally amoral suicide and says that it was a happy thing or that your just retarded and suggested that "its just a story, who cares, as long as theres a happy ending'. let me know if my analysis is unfair.
It's alright
Music is nice, and the flash itself works well with the music and the animation is different from normal flash indeed. Feels like it could be better though, maybe if it was a little longer.
AliensOnToast responds:
Haha yeah it probably would have been better longer. However, I was already a minute and a half over the time limit for the assignment. :)
grr
makes no sense what so ever, but it's entertaining so it managed to grab a few stars out of the air