Sucks
Story is bad, animation is non-existent. Boring. Stop making these. 3 points since you did technically make something.
Reviews for "KAZAHANA: Merciless"
i like it
i like it but i thought it was kinda of corny to kill the guy with tha headband like that and the girl trying to get revenge for her husband like that wasnt really epic enough for the story but still it rocked
not bad
Here is my only suggestion that I think you should really take seriously. You have a good grasp on writting and have no problem animating but I highly suggest you "fine tune" your artwork. Something about it makes the characters seem like they are quickly thrown together and the shading is all smudgy. I don't suggest changing your artwork for the series but maybe do some more experimenting with it. Try some exercises like studying the human anatomy and face studies. The reason why I suggest fine tuning your artwork is because I have been following your work for quite some time and you have more story driven animations rather then action. Which means theres a lot more dialog involed and if you fail to entertain with the plot alone then the art needs to get the job done. I think your art is the only thing holding you back from taking your animations to the next level.
Greatness.
I've been following Lifepoint1 animations since the early XIN days, (6 years ago) and you guys never disappoint. I can always look forward to great flash submissions from Max and Steve, as well as your team of voice actors.
There was only one thing that bothered me here. I always thought the character artwork (not just in this one, but in most of your animations) could use a bit of fine tuning. It's like the backgrounds and other objects are done in good detail, but the characters just seems a tad bit simplistic. Leaves me with a feeling like "they could've drawn that character better." I'm not saying the characters look horrible. Just that I think you're capable of drawing them better.
But you definitely make up for that with the epic fight scenes. I can tell that a lot of thought was put into choreographing the battle. I can definitely see the great detail that was put into that as well as the backgrounds and various objects in the scenes, as I mentioned earlier.
And you guys always have great storylines so no need to even comment on that. Lol. Overall, great job as usual!
=)
~ Jay
far out man
hey im new to this site and id like to know how to post flash animations?