It was ok
I find this fairly interesting, I saw only problem,
at points it would seem like the he was shouting and the voice sounded like it
did not match up, other than that it was interesting.
Reviews for "Hamlet: Act 3 Scene 1"
hell ya
I was actually going to make something like this but for Macbeth also for english
i'll be honest
it wasnt bad the voice work was solid and the drawings were uninspired overdone anime but really that's just the over popularization of anime getting to me the animation is where you need to work your images are decent but dont be afraid of a lil fbf at times i saw you trying to avoid as little redrawing as possable and the animation was really shaky and just looked weak over all it's not bad better than most of the submissions and i think you have potential i just wish you would try and be a little more original in your character designs even if you do see to like "random insanity" and like anime just try n change it a little bit at least so it sorta has your own feel annnnnyyyyyyyyywhhhhhhoooooooooo good work
RavenIga responds:
I'm not quite sure what you mean by the first part. This is my drawing style and those are my original character designs from my original comic. I've been drawing like this since I was a child, and I'm not about to change it because you think anime is over- popularized or "everywhere".
Yes, I was trying got a drawing redrawing but not for the reason you're thinking. I had a little under 2 weeks to put this together so yes the animation was going to be pretty weak. But thanks, I'll keep that in mind the next time I make something.
Hmm,,,
The animation was pretty good, and the music was good, but it was the voice acting that took away from the experience of enjoying it fully. I mean one can see you are trying to convey different emotions from the facial expressions of the character but it is that very fact that is your downfall. You were unable to fully show that emotion because the voice acting had very little emotion, it was as if the voice acting was merely there to let you know what he was saying, and was not connected to the animation it self.
meh
The animation was ok, there were a few jumps in parts that needed to be smoothed out. The voice acting was bad, there was no depth or emotion to it.
I would figrue that if you were to take the time to animate a flash, something that you could easily put a week into that you should at least take the extra minute or two to actually ACT, what you put up sounded like a bored highschooler reading the play in class.