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I've studied Hamlet in particular a great deal and I must confess I don't think this animation correctly captures the meaning of the soliloquy. I mean this is his inner turmoil of whether or not to carry out the grimly task which will damn him, or to commit suicide which would also damn him, it just doesn't feel like this animation really says anything about that. This is supposed to be a debate on existance, this is where the lines of sanity become blurred. All of these examples of pain and suffering make this scene hectic and fast paced, however your flash is slow and uninspiring, in fact you use the same background which contradicts the imagery. I also think you could have used a better audio for that, it wasn't very strong.