That was pretty cool
It was interesting to look at, but not necessarily fun to look at. It was boring and weird to me. Nonetheless, it looked and was animated well.
Reviews for "Birrus"
Meh...
Let me start of by saying that the music choice and art style where very appropriate for the cartoon and the animation was very good at the end when he eat the bird. That being said, I didn't get it. I didn't get what the walrus was doing or why he was sneaking up on the bird. At first it looked like he was going to try and eat the bird but then he just stairs at it. Then the bear shows up out of nowhere. I don't know if that was an inside reference or what, but what ever it was, I didn't get it. And as I said, the scene where he finally eats the bird was very well done. But as you said, you got lazy with the ending, and it ended rather abruptly. It looks like you have alot of potential, so I do look forward to whatever you make next, but please try and work harder at your humor and don't rush your endings, and you'll come a long way.
Miccool responds:
Thanks, I really need to work on these things as I've said. Pedobear is a meme from 4chan.. many internet goers know of it. But I agree with the "not getting it". That was a problem I was facing as I was making it; I have difficulty with body language and expression.
Could be better
Water effects are excellent, the cuts are really bad and most importantly ... DONT HAVE HISTORY!!!
PS: The music you chose is not good :D
Kinda dissapointing
Awesome water effects. Nothing else? To be honest, no. The lack of sound effects, combined with the Pink Panther-theme and a few shots that lacked contingency, makes this flash mediocre at best.