wow
more like pedirrus, amirite?
sorry. Nice animation, but some scenes could use a bit of refining. Loved the bit where the bird flew away and the walrus thing dove into the water.
wow
more like pedirrus, amirite?
sorry. Nice animation, but some scenes could use a bit of refining. Loved the bit where the bird flew away and the walrus thing dove into the water.
Decent
I thought you could of cleaned the line work a bit more, just felt like you left it a bit half assed.
good, but short
My only gripe with this, is that you didn't give your characters the time to develop, (For those that didn't understand, the story is about a walrus that wants to get it on with a bird). Yet even though the conflict was clear, you didn't give us enough time to actually feel the characters, and get a good grasp of what's happening.
P.S. Pedobear scene = EPIC WIN!!!!
Yeah, I need to work on all that directing jazz. Who knew it was so hard? Thanks for your review
looks good
Great animation man. You're improving. :)
Very well animated.
The style fit well with the story, and the animation was very fluid.
But I don't know why you insisted on using such obnoxious scene transitions... The flashing black squares and moving lines took away from my enjoyment of the movie. This was made in Flash and not Powerpoint am I correct?