Hah! Excellent!
Personally, I loved this piece! Your emphasis on fluidity defintely shows! Everything just seemed to...well...for lack of a better word, flow! Perfectly! Honestly, I could easily see this becoming a commercial for some form of IT. Really liked the choice of music going on during the animation. It had an almost electrical feel to it that fit the rest of the piece perfectly.
In short: Very, very nice work!