Hmm, so its pretty late here. Not going to make a detailed review.
The trend I notice is that you start the song nicely, 0:15 goes slightly downhill as the intense feel has now turned into some happy hardcore stuff which I like to call teenager music. Picks up again at 0:45 and I have to add that the lead instrument buildup sounds a bit weak. Climax good use of percussion, but I'm still not liking that lead instrument. Doesn't match with those intense drums. Good use of sidechaining.
1:58 piano composition sounds a bit like "one finger composition" which wouldn't be a problem if it was better made in sound quality. I fell like this part is where you spent the least time on.
Yeah, I know rushed review. Overall, you made a song where half the instruments are good and the other half sound rushed. I would classify parts of the song as video game music which is probably not what you were going for. I also feel that you know how to use your music program well, but the composition is your weakest part. If you can get that improved on, all your future stuff will be that much better. You at least agree with me for the piano composition right...especially the ending.
5/5 review and vote.
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