Fan...tastic
I tell you, if I'd run across this on the Saturday morning cartoons I would have thought it to be developed by a fully funded team of animators, writers, and artists. To find out that it was developed by a couple of intrigued guys using Flash...I am blown away.
This is the first episode of your series I've watched, but I'm hooked. EVERYTHING was fantastic. EVERYTHING. You have a compelling storyline here, along with perfect animation, an AMAZING soundtrack and a terrific artistic foundation. All you need now is the full endorsement of a cartoon company and you'll have yourself a real gem of a network show! Then again, maybe you already have and there's something that I'm unaware of, ha ha.
But really, keep up the terrific job. This is one of a kind and you guys are what makes Newgrounds and the online user-based Flash community so unique, creative and compellingly amazing.