i don't like it that much.
i felt talked down to. it was too much like a funducational specail. there were some pretty class jokes, but the rest of it i didn't enjoy. the scripting seemed week, i dunno, i didn't enjoy at all.
Reviews for "WHOOKOS Beta: Epis 1"
Why was this front paged?
Tweeny animation is tweeny. I'm not saying I'm a better animator than you, so don't get me wrong, but you need more frame by frame. Plus, you made the guy grab his friend's balls?! What the hell? What kind of vibe is that supposed to give off? You could have left it at "I can't feel my balls," But no. Not you, being the comical genius you are. You had to make him reach down, and grab his friends balls.
Not only was the animation tweeny, but the voice acting was very... average. Not very good. At all. I would suggest finding new VA's. Not only that but the idea for the episode has been used so many times before. Guy pisses bully at school off and has to fight him, very original. The only difference is that anyone but you could pull the idea off.
The jokes were stale, to say the least. Stating the obvious constantly doesn't usually make for good humor and slapstick isn't funny if you can't pull it off. I'd consider having a co-writer or something that has funny material.
Don't pull the "OH, you're just mad because you can't get views" thing either. I don't expect views, I'm new to Newgrounds and only have one animation up.
Nice attempt, but overall, I just don't think it's worth the front page space.
not funny
really bored
really... bored, i didnt laugh once at all. Typical random stuff oh man "math joke"
if i wanted to just see people go about their daily lives i wouldnt be online to begin with
Wish fulfillment at its worst
"WHOOKOS Epis: 1" offers chilling insight into the way many socially-awkward newgrounds animators see (or wish they saw) themselves in real life. The plot is generic and tacked on, and anything close to a punch line has been replaced by the antics of five self-satisfied and completely identical friends who exist only to frolic in a world specifically crafted for them. All this is accompanied by a predictably tasteless almost-anime art "style" and primitive voice work. The animation is mediocre.
Depressing
If yo absolutely don't care what other people think than what is there to strive for? I am a teen and I don't rarely ever comment on stuff because it's the internet so who freaking cares but something about this trend in American youth and by that I mean all youth always think they are better than everyone just pisses me off. Personally I always considered myself an athletic nerd sorta but something about this just pisses me off and seems wrong in a deep fundamental sort of way...
God I feel like a prude writing this.