Well..okay...
The storyline was pretty boring, there was nothing exciting about this flash at all. The character designs are bland, the voicing I thought was alright, the animations pretty good.
However This flash was boring, nothing was funny. Not only that the drawing style was...okay I guess. It wasn't anything that really caught my eye, just....bland...and...boring....yeah.
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WHY WAS I LINKED TO THIS
What did I just try to watch? I expect front page to give somewhat amusing content but god damn, that was really boring and stupid. The only people who would like this is your friends, fucking fgts, and you.
Really lame dude, the script is just garbage, a joke.
Animation is at least tolerable.
Coulda Been A Lot Better
The animation is acceptable, yet the stroy has many flaws, this series could only appeal to dorky kid groups. Don't get me wrong, I have some nerdy friends that would absolutely love this, but as for most absent-minded teenagers, this video is a total borefest, all I saw was a total sausage fest group of middle schoolers that love to play a game called WHOOKOS that is never explained, and anything that was attempted to be funny was jokes about fan-based hobbys and homosexuals.
I really can't see this being a successful series, I suggest adding a female main character, and maybe less nerd talk... Baseing a series about a bully at school wouldn't be a good idea either...
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I liked some of the angels you chose for certain parts, but to be honest dude, a lot of it was tweening, and the mouth moving was just repeating, it worked, but it would look a lot better if you did a little more "frame by frame". And normally I'd push that all aside if the voice work and writting was good, but...It wasn't :/ Sorry dude, just something you can work on
Is this for 10 year olds?
Ok the animation was pretty good. But why in hell are most of the jokes are about farts? And the other jokes are just over used and not funny. And the over use of the curse words and peeps are just annoying. And I found it extremely lazy of you to put an old flash in this because you didn't want to animate that haimdo gumdo thing. I found the hot tub scene very disturbing. This was pretty much stupid.
Animation - 8/10
Story - 2/10
Voice - 6/10
Humor - 1/10
Overall you need to work on it and aim your audience to people who arn't 5 years old