What's the dolphin saying
What's the dolphin saying after the dino wants to tell he was lying? I can't understand it! Or is that on purpose!
What's the dolphin saying
What's the dolphin saying after the dino wants to tell he was lying? I can't understand it! Or is that on purpose!
it is what it is
It had its good points, its bad points, its boring points, and subtle easily missed humor.
It's good points were the links to the earlier episodes in case someone didn't see them, the relaxing music in the main menu, the subtle humor(an example being gobbles eyes when kickflip all of the sudden flew up), and the line "i was almost killed by a tree". And the voice acting quality(not script) was also amazing here. The credits music was also really good as well.
Its bad points were the script( kind of overly generic with some of your jokes like "i didnt have all 150, i only had 149...IM A FAILURE, Dinosaurs have been extinct for 65 million years... its extremely unlikely that we would come accross such a thing!). Not to mention the "joke" of the twist to the actual story. Also, the voice syncing with the mouths was a bit off, not that it affected viewing so much. My advice would be that the script is the only real weak point, and for future episodes( since this is only "season finale", there's probably going to be more seasons of this) just try doing simple techniques to double check if your jokes are or aren't funny, such as seeing if they make you yourself laugh, your friends/family/anybody you know laugh, or looking at them and thinking "okay, what could make this even funnier? how funny is it already? should i just not use this line at all?"
And on a side note, why did gobbles(i never expected to use this name seriously) personality change so much from what it was in the first 2 episodes to this grumpy "upset with every single development that goes on" person?
But since its been done, its not like you would remake this episode based on my, and evidently a few other people's looking down, review. This review may or may not get bombed with "useless" for being less than a 10, and probably won't even get a response(assuming you read this in the first place), but hopefully the quality will go back to what it was(or even better), instead of getting even worse.
Not that im saying this is bad, there are plenty of flash out there that dont even deserve a 1/10 if this is what the standard for 10 would be. It's just that compared to all else you've made, this is kind of below the standard you "set" in all of your other flash.
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Season finale? woow woow woow... I wanna see more!
i thought it was funny...
lol
Getting better
The dialog in this one was a step above the other two. By the way, i have the sudden urge to go and buy a year subscription to playboy. Do you get commission?If so do they pay you in porn?