just few points
i'm just going to point out some flaws i noticed, (including very minor things)
since there probably will be enough praises of this game.
below are listed in order of importance.
***when i made a wrong choice and die later because of it, 'Try again' should take me back to where that wrong choice was made, so that i could fix it.
not the case where I decide to barricade the back door to the mall.
the choices I make after i die because of not barricading the door enough meant nothing, as i would die again regardless.
***i think i'm supposed to die when i run into zombie farmer when trying to fix engine. I tried again and met the farmer without any ammo, i still lived (even though it says he ripped out my windpipe)
***if I don't bring the antibiotics back with me, it still says i saved my wife, even though i didn't, and it shows on next page.
***voice and text is different near the end, when i finally reached the farm.
also, when i choose to stay and fight when zombies horde the mall, i read among them, but it says one of them.
***narrator stumbles couple times. (once at 'until they noticed me' when going back to the group after the silence. once more elsewhere, but you probably know of these already)
***typo. the script contains both realize and realise. While are correct, only one should be used throughout. also, my farther-in-law.
***only time you can use rope, it doesn't help at all. (also, you can choose to abseil down the building even if you didn't chose rope at beginning.) but this is ok, since rope is a silly item to choose over crowbar or extra ammo.
***when i get shot by Ox, the game over graphic is still zombie eating me.
***in the picture of when I get to the roof, i'm always holding a pistol.