Its a good book...
At first I was really disappointed. I thought it was going to be a wild zombie shooter. Please remember I said at first I was disappointed. I seriously considered just clicking off and trying the next portal entry. I'm really glad I didn't. This game/short story reminded me of those old goosebump books by R.L. Stein. I especially remember the ones where you could choose your own destiny. The same is with this game (story) lol. I felt like a kid again. I truly enjoyed the elements of suprise as you truck through each paragraph. The detail of the story really makes you feel like you are there. The only think that I think could make this better. Would be to add some actual game portions. Example: inbetween paragraphs maybe a mini game of the task at hand. I believe that would truly add to the appeal of the game aspect. So all in all I really enjoyed it. Thx and please keep making them.