Has Potential
Looks good for an opening scene. Not much backround yet but that's good if you are trying to finish this in the future. I'm intrigued about what this girl is really . From what I can tell she might just be imaginary because of the way she fades out at the end of this. Then again, this scene could have nothing to do with the finished product like I've seen in a handle full of on VN's. Looks promising keep at it, you might have a hit.
The nurse ending
Well, I didn't really get it that well. I think I kinda do, he cut himself/got cut by something, but I'm not sure D:
Well written
The writing is very solid. The style lends itself well to this project, and the descriptions used were quite effective. The coloration and music also blended well with the story making a very nice presentation.
The multiple paths was very good. I found myself going through, compelled to find each ending, and as many of the different chat options as I could. I might describe more, but I don't want to chance ruining the fun for others.
Very poignant.
Strange.
It's definitely an intriguing game, but a little strange none the less. The endings don't really explain much, and it's odd how she seems to glitch up later into the game; is that implying she's just a figment of his imagination, or is it truly an error within the script?
Despite the low-quality of the colors, the shading works well, and the music sets a nice pace. All and all, it was a fun way to pass some time.
cool!
interesting device to show a codependent relationship
and the choices one makes to either linger or break free. I like teh endings
and the music. Great stuff.