the idea
the idea i'm sure was good and i think i get the point. It just didn't feel real the voice was good just not for that character. the art was not super but i have seen worse. it also felt kinda out there if you know what i mean.
the idea
the idea i'm sure was good and i think i get the point. It just didn't feel real the voice was good just not for that character. the art was not super but i have seen worse. it also felt kinda out there if you know what i mean.
Good
The intro made sense, "Press play for f**k sakes, theres not much time!" Its like.. a good short story. With the twist at the end and everything.
Only need to improve on voice acting and probably character art. Everything else was good.
Really good short story. Keep it up.
Great
This is a great message, and it really makes me think about who I want to be. I will be a Freshman in High School next year, and I will be deciding who I want to be for the rest of my life. This really made me think, and it sure made an impact. Thank you...
I'm Batman
No really, whats with the voice
Also, someone said this:
"Usually these serious shorts with amateur voice-acting come off as melodramatic, boring, and shitty. "
I can't help but think that is exactly what this did
Hmm
It was O.K. Not hating for all u guys about to say "NO U JUST SUCK" no. the voice didnt match the character... u spent alot of time on the art but not enough on the person itself. good story but u need a better sense of balance. Sorry :(
fair enough,
thanks for the feedback