It's really annoying
When people start their conversations in the title
Lolcats be lol.
It's really annoying
When people start their conversations in the title
Lolcats be lol.
Deep very Deep
Wow it was like a man tellling my life from he's mouth except death :P
That was real deep.
I can't find words to describe how good this is. This really makes you think.
That was one of the best written Stories I've seen - there are movies out there that are worse - but this really touches your Heart.
You did a great Job. Congratulaions
Fantastic Work
However, a little cliche at times. Try to avoid saying things that are said too often if you want to convey real meaning. The phrase "You know that saying [insert saying]" did not fit in with the imaginitivity of the entire piece, and you used it twice. Try to innovate, not fall in with cliches of the genre. Great job overall.
Excelent
I started to thing it was going to be something funny, because of the way it started, but it stills excelent. Magnificient story.