I like the emotion and simplicity. The instruments were beautiful! I think it should have a little more structure to it, though, and I didn't the pauses really added much to the piece, especially towards the end. It's a little too slow in that regard. I love the mood and instruments, but I think you should give it a little more form. You should keep working on it. :)
Reviews for "Together"
Mattashi responds:
Thanks for your review :) , I'll see and try if I can make it better.
I loved it, But it sounds a little too much like the dead island riptide theme from the CGI trailer, I mean, even the 3rd time it has the cello or violin, just like in that trailer. Other than that, I think it's good.
Mattashi responds:
Hmmm, I haven't seen the trailer from dead island I'll check it out. thanks for your review!
I actually had some inspiration for this track from the cast away movie (composer Alan Silversti).
Nice tune
So this was a nice tune you have here, I like the slow and soft sound of it seems like you could still have that sad feel with a tempo build up, but regardless this was a nice sound of work here some really nice vibe on it too so nice job here, I look forward to more.
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Maybe some tempo build ups.
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The fist time I've found an "audio" that i consider worth less than a 2
Does not convey a clear feeling of sadnes, maybe one of lonelyness in the beginning