Lol very nice
I'd soften the sounds up though lawl
Reviews for "Animation Kills"
Soupcat responds:
Yeh...like...Not gonna hapen, wait till I make a next animation. Bitch.
XDDD ok
looks like I should think twice before getting Flash!
Soupcat responds:
Yeh you should.
Just one little problem
Great animation you got going here! There was only 1 problem that i found a bit anoying for me. When teh guy would walk or his arms his joints woul like not line up or i would start seeing gaps between in the joints. If that was fixed it would be one of the best i seen :D
Soupcat responds:
Hahaa! First to notice.
You're good. Yes, I agree the limbs and everything is out of place. Although it appears as a very smooth animation, it's far from great.
That's why I said ''It doesn't look the way I want it to look"...because of all the "bugs" in there. At the end I was like "ok...i can fix that up...And I can fix that up...oh and that as well....oh dear that needs fixing" and it just kept coming and coming. So I decided to fuck it.
...In the way of giving up...yanno?.....anyway! Thx for the review.
mildly entertaining
nice what you done with this. animation was smooth running and the sound affects were good. concept was entertaining and the style you used suited. cant really fault this reason for 8 instead if 10:
> no voice acting to comment on
> not much content part from concept, although nice job
> (niggle) main character is fully drawn while background character is a stick man, miss match thats all
aside from my niggles this is good, maybe do something else with this flash part from the animation kills concept, maybe continue it on before he dies and take it somewhere else. maybe get more creative and show something like the world around him evolving in animation and gradually introduce more stuff into the world from that one line.... just a thought. anyways nice job keep it up ^_^
Soupcat responds:
;)
You hit the nail on the head my friend.
I was honeslty planning on taking the character to a higher level.
Like, pick up where this ends, and add some color in FbF or sum shit, and liek....An entire theatre rising from the background.
Overall, what you said.
Thx fo the review...Wish it ahd a beterere gscoreorej getho....Sleeeep....
I actualy felt sorry for the guy
Started off nice and cute and I liked it. Then I saw him throwing the sword in the air. I knew what was going to happen. I actually felt sorry for the guy. He looked like he was having fun just exploring stuff. I got a chuckle out of this and it's very well animated.