I thought It was okay
I mean, it wasn't a masterpiece, and it wasn't even considered great. It was okay, just, why in the hell did the black dude have an Indian accent?
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Blakant responds:
its becuz he's an idian? lol
For a pilot, not that great but not crap either
I dont think the artwork on this was that bad. I see alot of work went into getting alot of voice actors for it, but then the trouble should of been put into making a more introduced storyline for the first ever episode. I did laugh at the Achievement joke, even if it has been done before.
Reviews have been harsh I take it for the lack of character introductions and that you can only just figure out the story. I'd try and get more creative jokes in the ones to come, otherwise it might stay dull. If anyone remembers 'College University' years back, which was similar to this, was a very good series. More will have to be put into the next additions in order for it to get more attention. Not a terrible start by any means. 7/10.
Lacking of story line...
It was a very unnecessary intro in the creative building and it was hard to figure who were the main characters until the 2nd scene, whom I still do not know the names of.
If you need to look at the credits for the names of the characters, it usually means that they had no real impact on the story or you did not mention their names in the first place.
Only names I heard and remembered were: The Janitor, Geena, and King.
I would comment on the story, but there was no real story or plot. The only thing that is saving this is that it's p1. The problem with this is that you must hook the viewer to watch the next parts in which I am sorry you have failed.
Your jokes were not that funny except for the past relationship between Geena and King but it was immediately ruined by "achievement unlocked" gag. It would had been fine if there were instances of video games in the story but all you had was an art class assignment.
At times the sound effects seem to be louder than the voices. There was no medium to any sound to this flash.
All that aside you have great promise for being an animator. Definitely room for improvement but a lot better than what I seen on this website.
Just work on your story more and the right jokes will come. I'll be there for the p2.
What?
The first episode of the series and you would think that the story would be explained more. Lets face it, the script and story of it was awful and I didn't understand what the video is suppose to be about. The animation was allright, but the story was just awful. If you make another one, explain whats happening and what the thing is suppose to be about. 3/10 and 1/5
A good start off series.. But lacking that little.
There was a issue with the volume of the voice overs, quiet at some points then when turned up, blasted treble got in the way.. I like this series, but it lacks that potential to make the characters grow, sure you got the scene in uni spot on, but.. It just lacked that little bit which could make it better.. 9/10