Lacked funny
I dunno if it was intended to be a comedy or what, but I got the sense it was. Since it wasn't actually funny, that just ruined everything for me. Work on your timing and delivery.
Reviews for "U: Submission Day"
awesome
thats all there is to say its awesome
Crap.
DaemonDraxx: "I feel like ramming my head into a wall to forget what I just watched. So, how did this make front page?"
Welcome to newgrounds buddy, tons of crap gets front page all the time.
writing needs alot of work
the animations good, and i bloody love that jazz-funk ending tune, but the script was dry, it had moments, like saying no to geena, that cracked me up, but everything else was kinda dissapointing.
PS im actually living the life of this show, if you want some funny stories I got whole bag of em here
Blakant responds:
sure, juz contact me, glad if u can help me. THANKS!! Looking forward from u. =D
Heck, I'll even send u a PM right away
5/10
The animation was good, and also the only reason you got into top 5. Besides that, you lacked a story, much less any character development. I had no clue who anyone was, or much less what was even going on. Before you go leaping into something I'll give you small advice of making a script you feel comfortable with, maybe even have a peer review about it before releasing something.
Blakant responds:
okay thanks. I did had few feedback from some of ppl I met based on the script, fix here n there. But still, not managed to impressed every1. Sry for that, and we're trying to work on the E1P2 atm. And we'll do our best. =]