It was good, but not to good.
You have a real talent sir. The Cartoon itself was very fun to watch and I enjoyed the art and animation but this script only got a chuckle out of me. Though the voice acting wasn't bad, just kinda annoying IMO. But no big deal.
I'm sure other episodes of this have been more hysterical and no one can please everyone, so I gave this a score that I think it deserves and only docked you two stars.
RB