liked it
especially the looney tunes start up and end, noticed some sound effect from flintstones, like the laugh at the end :) keep up the good work
Reviews for "Explosive joking"
Great style, poor punch-line
You had some very nice fbf work there and you also did a very good job of exaggerating the actions of the characters making it seem a lot more like a classic looney toons animation, so I give you credit for that. I kind of get the feeling though that you mainly just wanted to do an animation with this style but didn't initially have a story. So instead of thinking out a story to match the style you sort of whipped up this basic slap-sticky idea and started animating, this is where the animation suffers. Although unlike some other reviewers I believe you deserve a good score based on the art style itself. So although it was well executed the story-line was still extremely lacking. Next time plan out the concept a bit more and let the idea inspire the style. Still great stuff and keep at it, I really loved the animation!
-Z
SimonG responds:
Yeah. I just felt like it was more fun to do, when you really have no plot lol.
But I really see that plot isn't my thing.
But I'll get better!
Thanks for the review :)
Old Time-y :D
Looks pretty good, and you did a great job emulating the old cartoon style- especially with the sound effects. Like the music too. Thanks for giving everyone a sort-of reminder about how cartoons started.
Really?!
Very disappointing, very little imagination, and very little humor. If you're going to do slap stick humour fine, but this is just lazy.
Lol it was fun
I would give a 9 cuz it was kinda short but the animation itself was too funny and simple to understand to give just a 9 D: so 10