Reviews for THE CROSS pt.1 of 2

[SpikeVallentine]

duuude

why did you make it go so fast?

This is sensetive content, please "slow it down" man.

I believe in this stuff and agree with everything, but even me, I couldn't really keep up with it. (in general i aint even saying im a genuis or fast reader. but in general, imagine those who are slower than me and are hearing it for the first time.)

please dude...slow it down. i was a bit annoyed how fast it went. cause its like, "do you care for us to hear/see what you made?" it doesnt seem like it.

so i guess.......your future projects...i guess...moderation? dont make things too quick and of course not too slow.

[maxiixam]

brilliant

keep em coming!!

[SerraStryke]

thanks

it's good to be reminded again.

and I agree with SpikeValentine, it is a good topic to have slowed it down. but still good.

[blank0000]

Great re-telling

Our religious views differ, but your rendition of said story is very well done, and I prefer it to a lot of other forms I've heard it in.

[Lindstown]

Loved it

Hey, Jonathan.
Great stuff ur doin'. Keep 'em comin'.

Steph Townsend

nahtanojmal responds:

Thanks Steph