Reviews for Super Paper Robot

[JoexP]

Cardboard Confrontation

I liked the art, and I certainly appreciate the time and effort you put into it.
Still, there were some flaws that kept me from being able to really enjoy all of this as a whole.

The animation was suited to the "cardboard" theme and premise.
The music was unique and went nicely with the animation.
The only real thing that didn't seem to help was the rather lackluster story. As far as "havoc" goes there really wasn't much...and the robot leaves shortly after having arrived. The helicopter's really didn't serve much as of a purpose either, except as the one thing that gets destroyed by the unfortunate person being thrown by the robot.

As a short animation, this isn't bad at all. It seems you weren't planning a large scale "robot vs. city" thing here, and that's alright. If you were ever to expand on this I'd recommend drawing some more people, and maybe making the robot attack/be attacked a bit more.

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Good luck with your future animations! =D

M4KBOT responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism, you make some valid points and I will use them to improve my future work.

[Aneuryzm]

Agree with rockpawn

Firstly, I agree entirely with what Rockpawn has said. If you were to expand on this concept and art, it could really take off (no pun intended). I too was thinking the same thing about the jets on the feet

I can't give a higher score, A. for the incomplete story, and B. the lack of a proper play button.

[CrimsonLancer]

well you see

great idea without any effort

[ubercupcake]

meh

could of been longer but keep up the good work!

[aimless-void]

Hmm..

Well, I can certainlyy appreciate the effort you put into this. I can imagine that the paper scanning animation technique you used was indeed a difficult thing to pull off, hence the overall shortness and simplicity of this flash. Still...I can't really find myself enjoying it. It was slow-paced and rather uninteresting. I will say the music you used suited the animation well, I'm just not sure if I find this endearing or annoying...

I give you half points for the extra effort you gave, because something like that does deserve respect, but you lose half for the distinct lack of entertainment value.