Reviews for Umichan Dark Winter

[Jasra343]

fairly descent

i like how things had a nice feel to it; i would comment on the art, but I haven't attempted at animating anything other than sprites, so I got no xp on how hard it is to animate using the computer

Vortex00 responds:

thanks for the feedback

[nighttimewheel6]

WTF deathstar

my thoughts on opening scene

Vortex00 responds:

heh.

[Ericho]

Looks good

This was fairly entertaining to watch and it was good to see all of those voices and songs. The animation was simply gorgeous at least in terms of how the camera worked and the background. The downsides was that the character animation could have been better. It is a little hard to take this seriously when her breasts bounce as she is running. I don't know, maybe if she was hotter, I wouldn't care. This still has a great atmosphere to it and really keeps you guessing.

There was not that much action but you are trying to first set up your characters and story. Congrats on managing to make it into the Christmas 2009 section. This could use some more dialogue as it got confusing. What matters is that it does seem to have an original design and for the most part it works. The transition effects are good too.

Vortex00 responds:

Thanks. hopefully I can get better at animation and story telling.

[johandark]

Good Animation... Strange Story...

I don´t know if you are telling a story having in mind that people now already the character Umi-Chan... but i don´t really understand the story very much...

The animation is cool, and works really well with the music. Voices are really cool but with a low level was difficult to listen them, even the pretty voice of Nakoruru.

but as Slaanash said... I do not know why but draws attention so that you look to the end. Probally is the good animation, probally the great smoke and the velocity of the animaiton with the music, but the result is Cool. and that´s what matters.

Good Job.

Vortex00 responds:

thanks man. I'm working on more animations starting from the beginning.

[miichu]

uhm...

she looked fat when she was running o_o
her face looked a bit long but the animation was epic :)

Vortex00 responds:

yeah the face is too long. I had my screen at a resolution that didn't fit my monitor when I drew it. It looked right at the time. But when I finally realized it and adjusted it, a bunch of pics I drew were actually elongated. Including the stuff for this animation XD