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Reviews for "Tir Na Nog : Episode 1"

It was good

Though I didn't like the way you set their walks, where they do a little hop, ye know? The normal walk's better in my opinion.

Also, the lip syncing I think you may have noticed, but it seems like there's either too much or too little. like when the one guy in blue/black says "I don't understand," and in the subtitles his mouth's flippin out.

And yah, like Guidodinho said, some of the music kind of made it feel like it was dragging on.

On a whole though, I've been a fan of your work so I have high expectations for your next episode :)

GoldenTot responds:

The hop is how it is in the game, and the mouths aren't set to sync to the words. Just some flap for no reason, haha. Thanks though!

Looks promissing

Looks nice and clean, no real sloppy parts in it. Only visual part that i didn't like was when you zoomed in on the sprites, they looked kinda blurry. I think it would be better i you'd leave the sprites in solid pixels instead of letting them get smoothed.

And i don't wanna be a prick, but i think the music choice was rubbish. The first and the last songs were pretty good as they didn't sound too bad and fitted in the situation pretty well, but the second and third sounded absolutely horrible and they didn't fit the scene verry well.

I also didn't get much of the story. I'll let that slip because you already told us so and i'll expect it to be clearer the next time, But...(yes there's a but) i think you should find a way too cut down on the filesize so you can put more into one episode, because this one didn't really show that much, it did make me curious for the next one though. I suggest doing something about the audio since that's often the reason for a big filesize (i know because i had that problem myself :p).

Anyways, looking forward to understanding a bit more of the story and watching the fighting scene on the next episode.

GoldenTot responds:

Thanks for the criticism, sir! I blur the pixels because trust me, it looks a lot worse when I leave them as their original form. I as well didn't quite like the second and third, but they were really all I had at my disposal at the time. I'll definitely put more thought into the soundtrack of the next episode.

The story will unravel as time goes by! Thanks again for the criticism.

Oh you...

Ending where the best part comes. Get to working more.

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... great,
i started missing maple story :(

Nice

I love how the story is going so far. Cant wait to see what is next.