good
but you had to make it longer
Reviews for "The Devil of New Haven"
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not bad totly but you cand do mor of thath
Could have been better
1. Grandpa's voicing was not suiting for an old man. Glad to see he has gray hairs and yet still sounds like one of the boys.
2. There wasn't any transitional scenes. The boys were just *there* at each new scene.
3. The scarecrow wasn't very creepy. It says "made of his own flesh" in the back story and yet it's just your garden variety scarecrow with a pumpkin head and red glowing eyes.
4. The ending could have been executed better than that. You just go straight to showing the scarecrow with gramps' head in his hand.
Disclaimer: Dialog written by 10 year old
Corny script, terrible voice acting, slappably predictable story line.... Christ, do standards really fall so low when it comes to web based animation? When it comes to web content I can forgive rough graphics, afterall not everyone has an animation studio at their disposal rather a mouse and something that can be loosely defined as a computer.
But a script and passable dialog is something that anyone should be capable of.... Graphically it was grand, but as a story driven piece this is incredibly weak with a script that wouldnt be acceptable for Movie or Tv so why should it be here?