I like your Style, but maybe not this way.
Ah.. such great detail in animation and drawing skills.. even though there wasnt that much of animation in it (best thing was the tea of the teacher on the table^^). I didn't expect the main character to have such a voice and the Way he said "per-so-na" could have been more spectacular. All in all nice visuals with an crazy athmosphere. You could be really great If you'd make a really creepy flash movie.
So lets say the design promised more than you actually get. It wasn't so funny in the end, but so fascinating in the beginning. You two make a good team. Try to reach aims on a higher level. You got the skills for that. I can't wait to see how far you can improve with an better idea.
Maybe you should try and make an Halloween movie before its too late.