Evokes Invader Zim/Aeon Flux, Could Engage More
So...I actually created a login this time to offer feedback to one of my few supporters of expression. :)
Your art is unique and tough to classify (not that I'm an expert). But I can definitely see Ms. Bitters in that classroom. Very grotesque.
It seems like a departure from your previous cartoons, which have been very surreal and the plot is not obvious. I think this one is easier for people to get their head around what's going on and what the story is. That's a good direction, even if the joke is perhaps more suited to the Penny Arcade 3-frame recipe.
Still, the "promo poster" you did with made the characters seem deeper. So I echo the other comments in saying the payoff isn't quite big enough. Obviously in one minute there's only so much you can do, but I wanted to know and feel more about who they are.
All told, there's more care taken here than in a lot of flash, and it shows. Plus I send kudos to anyone who finishes anything they're not being paid to do. :)
Good work!!